英语范文精读(二):书信、议论文与写人
这一期整理了三篇不同体裁的中考英语范文。建议用法:先通读全文 → 查看生词与短语 → 学习写作技巧点评 → 尝试自己仿写一篇。每篇附有全文翻译,可以折叠查看。
Essay 1 — A Letter to My Future Self
Dear Future Me,
I am writing this letter in my last year of junior high school. Right now, I am busy preparing for the zhongkao, and sometimes I feel tired and worried. But I want you to know that I am trying my best every day.
I hope that when you read this letter, you are already in a good high school. I hope you still love reading and playing basketball. Do not forget the friends who helped you during these difficult times — especially Li Ming, who always made you laugh when you were stressed.
I also want to remind you of something important: be kind to others. No matter how successful you become, never look down on anyone. Mom always says, “A warm heart is worth more than a high score.”
One more thing — please take good care of your health. Do not stay up too late, and remember to exercise. Your body is more important than any exam.
I believe in you. Keep going.
Yours,
Your fifteen-year-old self
1. 书信格式规范。开头 "Dear Future Me," 和结尾 "Yours, Your fifteen-year-old self" 符合英文书信的标准格式。中考作文如果要求写信,格式分不能丢。
2. 引用人物原话增强表达。"Mom always says, 'A warm heart is worth more than a high score.'" 引用妈妈的话让文章更加生动真实,也展示了直接引语的用法。
3. 情感层次分明。文章从当下的感受(tired and worried)到对未来的希望(good high school),再到做人的道理(be kind)和健康提醒,层层推进,内容丰富而不杂乱。
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亲爱的未来的我:
我在初中最后一年写下这封信。现在,我正忙着准备中考,有时候觉得又累又焦虑。但我想让你知道,我每天都在尽最大的努力。
我希望你读到这封信的时候,已经在一所好的高中了。我希望你仍然热爱阅读和打篮球。不要忘记那些在困难时期帮助过你的朋友——特别是李明,他总是在你压力大的时候逗你笑。
我还想提醒你一件重要的事:对别人要友善。无论你变得多么成功,都不要瞧不起任何人。妈妈总是说:"一颗温暖的心比一个高分更有价值。"
还有一件事——请照顾好你的身体。不要熬夜太晚,记得锻炼。你的身体比任何考试都重要。
我相信你。继续加油。
你十五岁的自己
Essay 2 — Should Students Use Mobile Phones at School?
Nowadays, many students bring mobile phones to school. Some people think this is helpful, but I believe students should not use mobile phones during school hours. Here are my reasons.
First of all, mobile phones make it hard to pay attention in class. When a phone vibrates or lights up, students cannot help but look at it. This breaks their concentration and affects their learning.
Secondly, using phones at school can lead to unhealthy comparisons. Some students may feel bad because their phone is not as new or as expensive as others’. This is not good for young people’s mental health.
However, I understand that some people argue phones are useful for looking up information. This is true, but I think students can do that after school. During class time, they should focus on the teacher and take notes.
In conclusion, I think schools should not allow students to use phones during class. If students need to contact their parents, they can use the phone at the school office. We should put learning first.
1. 议论文结构清晰。文章按照"提出观点 → 理由一 → 理由二 → 让步反驳 → 总结"的经典结构展开,逻辑严密,每段都有明确的中心句。
2. 使用连接词过渡自然。"First of all""Secondly""However""In conclusion" 这些连接词让段落之间衔接顺畅,也向阅卷老师展示了你掌握了议论文的篇章组织。
3. 先让步再反驳,显得客观。第四段先承认对方观点有道理("This is true"),再用 "but" 转折说明自己的立场。这种写法比一味否定更有说服力,也是中考议论文的加分写法。
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如今,很多学生把手机带到学校。有些人认为这是有帮助的,但我认为学生不应该在上学期间使用手机。以下是我的理由。
首先,手机让人很难在课堂上集中注意力。当手机振动或亮起来的时候,学生会忍不住去看。这会打断他们的专注力,影响学习。
其次,在学校使用手机可能导致不健康的攀比。有些学生可能因为自己的手机不如别人的新或贵而感到难过。这对年轻人的心理健康不好。
不过,我理解有些人主张手机对于查找信息很有用。这确实没错,但我认为学生可以放学后再做这些。上课时间应该专注于听老师讲课和做笔记。
总之,我认为学校不应该允许学生在上课期间使用手机。如果学生需要联系父母,可以使用学校办公室的电话。我们应该把学习放在第一位。
Essay 3 — The Person I Admire Most
Of all the people I know, the person I admire most is my grandmother. She is seventy years old, but she is still full of energy and always wears a warm smile.
My grandmother grew up in a small village. When she was young, her family was very poor, and she could not finish school. But she never stopped learning. She taught herself to read by borrowing books from neighbors. Later, she became a nurse and worked at a local hospital for over thirty years.
What I admire most about her is her positive attitude. No matter what difficulty she faces, she always says, “Every problem has a way out.” When I failed an important exam last year, I was very upset. She sat beside me and told me stories about the challenges she had overcome. Her words gave me the courage to try again.
My grandmother shows me that a person’s value does not come from wealth or fame, but from hard work and kindness. She is my hero.
1. 开头直接点题。"Of all the people I know, the person I admire most is my grandmother." 第一句就回答了题目的问题,阅卷老师一眼就能看到你的主题。中考作文切忌绕弯子。
2. 用具体事例支撑观点。文章没有空泛地说"奶奶很好",而是用"自学认字""当护士三十年""考试失利后的鼓励"等具体细节来展现人物品质,让读者印象深刻。
3. 结尾升华主题。"A person's value does not come from wealth or fame, but from hard work and kindness." 最后一段从个人故事上升到人生道理,让整篇文章更有深度。"not...but..." 句式也是中考常用的对比结构。
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在我认识的所有人当中,我最敬佩的人是我的奶奶。她七十岁了,但仍然精力充沛,脸上总是挂着温暖的微笑。
我奶奶在一个小村庄长大。她小时候家里很穷,没能读完书。但她从未停止学习。她通过向邻居借书自学认字。后来,她成为一名护士,在当地医院工作了三十多年。
我最敬佩她的是她积极的态度。无论遇到什么困难,她总是说:"每个问题都有出路。"去年我一次重要考试没考好,非常沮丧。她坐在我身边,给我讲她曾经克服过的困难的故事。她的话给了我重新尝试的勇气。
我奶奶让我明白,一个人的价值不在于财富或名望,而在于努力和善良。她是我心中的英雄。
